NOTE 01
Open on the hook
Short dramas are watched in a feed, so the first seconds of an episode have to explain the stakes without a warm-up: who wants what, and what is in the way. A slow establishing shot rarely survives that.
When you review an episode script in Pencil0, look at the first three or four lines of action and dialogue. If the conflict is not visible yet, ask the script agent to start later, in the middle of the problem. Because you edit by conversation, that is one request, not a rewrite.